“It’s not fair!” I sobbed, pitching the inkwell. It exploded against the white rock wall and bled darkness over the smooth stones, “It’s not fair! I worked just as hard as he did! Harder even!” Wetness scorched my cheeks and I shuddered with the sobs “Do you hear me?” I tipped my head back and ran my shaking hands over my bald head “I am better than he is! Better! One day you will be sorry, so ruddy sorry that you left me here!” I shrieked as voices retreated. “One day he will fail you when need him the most and then you will wish that you had taken me but it will be too late, too late.” My knees buckled and I sat down, holding my head. “You’ll be sorry, you will be, you will be.”
That's my entry for "Intense Emotion Suspense Technique" over at Enter the Door Within and I tied with Amy Browning for this technique, which means I get my choice of the The Door Within, Rise of the Wyrm Lord, or The Final Storm, lost chapters editions. I think that I'm going to go for The Final Storm. But I'm still debating.
Friday, June 15, 2007
I TIED!
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Psalm 49
A Psalm of Repentance
About Me
- everlastingscribe
- I tell stories all day long. Some with my pen, some with my keyboard and if you can find me, buy me a coffee and I'll tell you one too!
4 comments:
That's so funny, scribe. with the title, this post reads as a reaction to the tie! *gg*
Congrats!!
LOL :-D Silly blogger. I really am delighted. I've been grinning all day.
Hey Scribe-
Way to go! I'm so excited to get to tie with you. It makes it even better. :)
well im sure you will rock out with your entry's. I am having such horrid writers block and i cant (unblock it) lol. So i will keep working on it and if worst comes to worst i will write a piece of crap XD and submit that. The best of luck to ya.
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